Hello World!

8/2/2008 at 12:23 AM

I'm new here, as everyone probably knows, and have no clue how to work the site yet! ^_^
I'm working on it,though,
So basically, yeah. I dunno. I like writting, And I want to be a filmmaker, but I just need someone to help me with scripts. You see, I am good with coming up with the plot of a film, but what Im not good at is writign Dialogue. It always comes out rushed and stilted. :[

So, yep yep yep, thats about it for now.

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Magic

8/2/2008 at 12:20 AM

top and think about what your saying, seriously
put the drink down and stop acting so deliriously
but your not listening to me,
then mysteriously
i vanish into the pastel gray of the living room wall
hide out for a day and take the fall
and no one cares about this at all
but I think im going to say it anyways, just for me
history on display , for free
learn from my mistakes and flee
instead of going in gung ho
knowing i'll have to let everything go.
my love, my life, my fall from grace
my house ,my car, my bed, your face
until I'm a shadow on the floor
another creak the door
the riptide washing up on the shore
till the day they think of me no more.

Im going to show you a magic trick, now pay attention
and do i need to mention
that this will not need a suspension
of belief, like hollywood demands of you so often
that opens you up and makes you bleed until you soften
up like a pillow , but back on topic, lets not stray.
im going to have to ask you pick a day, any day.
Now keep that in your head, don't forget it,
every memory you must savor, dont regret it
if you seriously forget, dont sweat it.

now pick a, house any house, any on the street.
or maybe the local playground where the children meet.
arent they sweet?
dont forget there's the doorman to greet.
now, back on topic, do you have the house in your mind,
locked away where it'll be hard to find?
good!
I knew you would,
your a fast one, i can see it in your eye.
take a break, lets look at the sky
and watch the aeroplane fly by.

so you have the day, the house, what say
we take a little peek inside,
see how things work, see what they hide.
behind the walls, behind their pride.

what say you sir?
they look polite.
but here's the trick;
come back tonight.
to your delight,
or more likely, fright,
they will be creatures
in lack of light!

you see them sitting at the table
unable
to have a conversation that an stay stable
for more than a minute
and within it
is a hidden ode of hatred and spite.
would you be surprised if i told you
that the son will snap and kill them all
in the dead of night?

you shouldn't, i wouldn't, but then again
ive been around the block, so to say
while the rest of humanity has been under a rock, while i stay
behind, to find that humans are quite the destructors.
and the only way to rebuild is a reboot: death as the constructor
so i hope you enjoyed the show, its over, goodbye, adieu!
And as for the irony and fear i think it's best for it to stay with you.

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