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hey sweetpea! glad to see you're still around. not a whole lot, tbh. i don't know when i spoke to you last, but i got my first house, fell in love and am at university having the absolute time of my life. needed to get writing again though so hv seemed like the sensible option. how abotu you? all the best, stevie. x

hello stranger - i've made a new account so if you still use hv, it would be nice to say howdy. : ) all the best, stevie. [previously mister blue]

hey, thanks for the awesome comments (as usual)! "deception" went through a bit of a rewrite, let me know if you have anymore thoughts!

heyhey! i haven't been back long and have taken all my stuff down while i revise it. the readings went great. i got to meet the poet laureate. twice. which was like...insane. and the second time she recognised me form the first time. much fangirling as i'm sure you can imagine. iiii did pretty well in college so i've just moved to a new city to start university here, which, aside from being terrifying, is a terrific. it's a beautiful city. spent a week over the summer driving across france and seeing the not so tourist-ey bits - there was a lot of wine and a lot of ink involved in that trip, but i had a blast. um, and i'm currently working on a sort of...i call them concept anthologies, but i don't know the real name - a collection of poems following a plot? it's called, 'corona' aaand i'm hoping it'll be finished by christmas. or at least well on the way. that's pretty much my summer. now it's your turn to fill me in! xx

oh hell yes. i have missed you ='D
let humblevoice never take you from me again

probably quite creepy, but feel my appreciation

hey honey!
i just hid them for a little while,
but they're back now.
and no worries about the poem.
keep up the good work!
hey, i'm sorry to have to ask, but i know you've bene reading my work for a while
so you're probably a really helpful person to ask --
could you read my newest blog and maybe help me out with some pointers?
i hope all is well!
enjoy the summer, hun.
stevie.
xx

hey honey,
long time, no chat.
how are you?
i just wanted to thank you for your feedback.
i really appreciate it.
i'll work on it now.
<3
stevie.

hey kris -
thanks for your image comments
i wasn't expecting 'owt. it's kind of just an image diary of places i see and want to.
but i'm glad you saw them and enjoyed them.
the picturs with the swans -
i knew i recognised th willingborough factories from somewhere, jsut didn't strike me as half-life 2 until you said it! spot on!
xD
i will have a look through your images soon.
not only to return the favour, but also because some of the things you said about not focusing on one piece of a whole and such have me curious about the form your images take.
hope all is well.
excuse the typos.
stevie.
x

i'm not sure what you mean by "missing words", the impression that i left things out may be from the odd punctuation or lack thereof, but that's the whole notebook completely unedited. i appreciate yr interest though, and if it's just too crazy a thing to critique i understand. honestly, anything is useful at this point, it's a completely raw pome, even just pointing out an effective or ineffective line is useful. hope life is continuously beautiful in your world!

hey.
it was intentional on 'the evolution..'
your comments mean a lot,
though, i rarely say 'owt.
thanks.
<3