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hey there. thank-you so much for the comments on W/G #2 and Card Tower.
it means a lot.
my writing' dired up a little recently. (a lot of personal rubbish going on, which would usually inspire me but just seemed to have crushed me instead.)
but thank-you again.
it's not often i egt comments on my work from people other than dustcakeboy.
x

oh, thats reminds me about the comment on genus diomedia that i never responded to
sorry >w<
the double meaning of puzzled wasnt intentional
to be honest, it took me a while to think of what it was
(im a bit slow)
and about the repition here
but thats the way it came out
'It is mid-June and she smells like brine.
Her tube-nose is caught in the salty smell of her'

its a somewhat innocuous reference to something that happened to me in mid-june this year
brine smells terrible and she cant escape it,
i just wanted to make it so that it was as obvious as could be that the terrible, infectous odour that shes plagued by is herself.
though genus diomedea isnt about anything in particular,
its just an obtuse description of an albatross

Bunny is a brilliant book of poetry by Selima Hill
(whom i love beyond sense and reason)
everything is so concise and simple, but every metaphor and smilie is so much bigger than all the words shes used put together.
its like drowning slowly in a nest of soft feathers.
its about a young girl who is abused by a lodger in her house.
my favourite book of hers is 'lou lou' which is about a woman in a mental hospital.
theyre so saddeningly lovely~

and ive missed you posting things on HV~
which sounds suck-up-ish, but you are quite probably my favourite writer here

*have not

>w<

i feel sort of bad that i have commented your work for a while
but its grown all changed and new
and im not sure what to say to it~

I love it Heidi!! Thank you!!

Heidi, I just wanted to let you know that I think you are a wonderful person who deserves all great things in life! I'm SO glad we crossed paths!! "Heidi's Hill" was and is monumental!! Thanks for being YOU!!

just stopping by to say hi!! :) have a nice weekend!!!

amazing? AMAZING?! the amazingness that you see in me is put to shame in the awe that is laid before me when just a thought of you crosses my mind...

i like the almond tree writing i'll try and remember that :nice.