thanks for the comment ~ the suggested revised version is actually so much better. i'm just going to palm you off with the excuse that the poem was written whilst i was waiting for a friend to finish doing something boring u_u i'm never too sure what's going on with the enjambment - it's just how it happens (i don't know...) anyhoo
robin
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William
M.U.T.T.
A Box of Candies
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I feel so strange meeting everyone I know from dA here.